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Each other, blam'd enough elsewhere, but strive
In offices of love, how we may lighten

Each other's burden, in our share of woe;
Since this day's death denounc'd, if ought I see,
Will prove no sudden, but a slow-pac'd evil,
A long day's dying to augment our pain,
And to our seed (O hapless seed!) deriv'd.

To whom thus Eve, recovering heart, replied,
Adam, by sad experiment I know

How little weight my words with thee can find,
Found so erroneous, thence by just event
Found so unfortunate; nevertheless,
Restor❜d by thee, vile as I am, to place
Of new acceptance, hopeful to regain
Thy love, the sole contentment of my heart
Living or dying, from thee I will not hide
What thoughts in my unquiet breast are risen,
Tending to some relief of our extremes,
Or end, though sharp and sad, yet tolerable,
As in our evils, and of easier choice.

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976. Tending to some relief of and seed at once, they should

our extremes,

Or end,] Adam had said before, that the death denounced upon them, as far as he could see, would prove no sudden but a slow-paced evil, a long day's dying, and would likewise be derived to their posterity. Eve therefore proposes, to prevent its being derived to their posterity, that they should resolve to remain childless; or if they found it difficult to do so, that then, to prevent a long day's dying to themselves

make short and destroy themselves. The former method she considers as some relief of their extremes, the latter as the end. And, as Dr. Greenwood observes, Milton might possibly take the hint of putting these proposals into the mouth of Eve, from Job's wife attempting to persuade her husband in his afflictions to curse God and die. Job ii. 9, 10.

978. As in our evils,] That is, considering the excess of evil to which we are reduced; an

If care of our descent perplex us most,

Which must be born to certain woe, devour'd

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By Death at last; and miserable it is

To be to others cause of misery,

Our own begotten, and of our loins to bring

Into this cursed world a woeful race,

That after wretched life must be at last

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Food for so foul a monster; in thy power

It lies, yet ere conception to prevent

The race unblest, to be'ing yet unbegot.

Childless thou art, childless remain: so Death
Shall be deceiv'd his glut, and with us two
Be forc'd to satisfy his ravenous maw.
But if thou judge it hard and difficult,
Conversing, looking, loving, to abstain

From love's due rites, nuptial embraces sweet,
And with desire to languish without hope,

Before the present object languishing

With like desire, which would be misery

And torment less than none of what we dread;

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Then both ourselves and seed at once to free
From what we fear for both, let us make short,
Let us seek Death, or he not found, supply
With our own hands his office on ourselves:

elegant Latin use of the word
As. Cic. Epist. Fam. iv, 9. Nam
adhuc, et factum tuum probatur,
et, ut in tali re, etiam fortuna
laudatur xii. 2. Non nihil, ut in
tantis malis, est profectum, that
is, considering our ill situation.
Richardson.

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take in some editions, and especially in Milton's own, where this imperfect verse is printed as a whole verse, and the words so Death wanting to complete the line are added to the next line, which is thereby made as much too long as this is too short. So Death shall be deceived his glut, and with us two.

Why stand we longer shivering under fears,
That show no end but death, and have the power,
Of many ways to die the shortest choosing,
Destruction with destruction to destroy?

She ended here, or vehement despair

Broke off the rest; so much of death her thoughts
Had entertain'd, as dy'd her cheeks with pale.
But Adam with such counsel nothing sway'd
To better hopes his more attentive mind
Lab'ring had rais'd, and thus to Eve replied.
Eve, thy contempt of life and pleasure seems
To argue in thee something more sublime
And excellent than what thy mind contemns ;
But self-destruction therefore sought, refutes
That excellence thought in thee, and implies,
Not thy contempt, but anguish and regret
For loss of life and pleasure overlov’d.
Or if thou covet death, as utmost end

Of misery, so thinking to evade

The penalty pronounc'd, doubt not but God

1004. and have the power,
Of many ways to die the short-
est choosing,
Destruction with destruction to
destroy?]

So these verses are pointed in
Milton's original editions; and
the construction is this, and have
the power to destroy destruction
with destruction, choosing the
shortest of many ways to die.

1007. She ended here-
—so much of death her thoughts
Had entertain'd, as dy'd her
cheeks with pale.]

Virg. Æn. iv. 499.

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Hæc effata silet: pallor simul occupat ora.

Jortin.

-maculisque trementes Interfusa genas, et pallida morte futurâ. En. iv. 644.

-Multorum palor in ore Mortis venturæ est, faciesque simillima fato. Luc. vii. 130. Hume.

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Hath wiselier arm'd his vengeful ire than so
To be forestall'd; much more I fear lest death
So snatch'd will not exempt us from the pain
We are by doom to pay; rather such acts
Of contumacy will provoke the Highest
To make death in us live: Then let us seek
Some safer resolution, which methinks
I have in view, calling to mind with heed
Part of our sentence, that thy seed shall bruise
The Serpent's head; piteous amends, unless
Be meant, whom I conjecture, our grand foe
Satan, who in the serpent hath contriv'd
Against us this deceit: to crush his head
Would be revenge indeed; which will be lost
By death brought on ourselves, or childless days
Resolv'd as thou proposest; so our foe
Shall 'scape his punishment ordain'd, and we
Instead shall double ours upon our heads.
No more be mention'd then of violence
Against ourselves, and wilful barrenness,
That cuts us off from hope, and savours only
Rancour and pride, impatience and despite,

1024. To be forestall'd;] This word appears too low for heroic poetry it might not be so trite and vulgar formerly; for Fairfax likewise uses it in his Jerusalem, cant. xv. st. 47.

But forth there crept (from whence
I cannot say)

An ugly serpent, which forestall' d
their way.

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rious and sublime poem than at present. It occurs in Comus, 285.

Perhaps forestalling night prevented them.

And again, v. 362.

What need a man forestall his date of grief, &c.

So also in Sylvester's Du Bartas, p. 88. ed. fol. and often in Spenser and Shakespeare. T. Warton.

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Reluctance against God and his just yoke
Laid on our necks. Remember with what mild
And gracious temper he both heard and judg’d
Without wrath or reviling; we expected
Immediate dissolution, which we thought
Was meant by death that day, when lo, to thee
Pains only in child-bearing were foretold,
And bringing forth, soon recompens'd with joy,
Fruit of thy womb: on me the curse aslope
Glanc'd on the ground; with labour I must earn

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My labour will sustain me; and lest cold

Or heat should injure us, his timely care
Hath unbesought provided, and his hands
Cloth'd us unworthy, pitying while he judg’d ;
How much more, if we pray him, will his ear
Be open, and his heart to pity' incline,
And teach us further by what means to shun
Th' inclement seasons, rain, ice, hail, and snow?
Which now the sky with various face begins
To shew us in this mountain, while the winds
Blow moist and keen, shattering the graceful locks
Of these fair spreading trees; which bids us seek

1054. Glanc'd on the ground;] The quibble here is insufferable. Warburton.

1066. -shattering the graceful locks] This shattering is an excellent word, and very expressive of the sense, shaking or breaking to pieces; and etymologists derive it of the Belgic

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Schetteren. Our author had used it before in his Lycidas,

Shatter your leaves before the mel-
lowing year.

And locks of trees is a Latinism:
Spissæ nemorum comæ, Hor.
Od. iv. iii. 11. Arboribusque
comæ, iv. vii. 2.

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