3. Lift the latch! ah gently! ah tenderly-sweet! now in Sir Charles Dilke's possession Keats wrote the Song; but it is not printed in that or in either of the four later Pocket-books which complete the series. For the text of the song I follow the evidently later manuscript in Sir Charles Dilke's copy of Endymion. The variations shown by the Pocket-book are, in stanza 1, line 7, tread softly for soft tiptoe; in stanza 2, line 6, Hath for Has, and line 7, darkness for dusk; in stanza 3, line 2, chink for clink, line 4, dream for sleep, line 5, may for shall, and line 6, morning for morning's. The final couplet is wanting in the later manuscript, with which Lord Houghton's version corresponds in the main. Here, however, previous texts read his soft twin-eggs and coo; and I am compelled to revert to the reading of the only manuscript I know of that couplet. It must be a later reading, because Keats never damages his work; and his, if a correct transcript from a third manuscript, is poetically inferior to her, while soft is inapplicable to eggs-applicable to the birds substituted. With lines 5 and 6 compare, in the garden song in Maud, But the rose was awake all night for your sake,....... The Laureate's sumptuous stanza can well afford the slight indebtedness. EXTRACTS FROM AN OPERA. O! ! WERE I one of the Olympian twelve, Their godships should pass this into a law,That when a man doth set himself in toil After some beauty veiled far away, Each step he took should make his lady's hand A kiss should bud upon the tree of love, DAISY'S SONG. I. The sun, with his great eye, And the moon, all silver-proud, Might as well be in a cloud. 2. And O the spring-the spring! I lead the life of a king! First given among the Literary Remains in Volume II of the Life, Letters &c. (1848), and assigned to the year 1818. Couch'd in the teeming grass, I spy each pretty lass. 3. I look where no one dares, And I stare where no one stares, And when the night is nigh, * FOLLY'S SONG. When wedding fiddles are a-playing, Huzza for folly O! And when maidens go a-Maying, Oh, I am frighten'd with most hateful thoughts! SONG. * I. The stranger lighted from his steed, 2. The stranger walk'd into the hall, And kiss'd 'em all unheard. 3. The stranger walk'd into the bower,— But my lady first did go, Aye hand in hand into the bower, Where my lord's roses blow. Among Dante Gabriel Rosetti's notes upon Keats I find one to the effect that this song "reminds one somewhat of Blake's The Will and the Way." 4. My lady's maid had a silken scarf, And a golden ring had she, And a kiss from the stranger, as off he went Again on his fair palfrey. Asleep! O sleep a little while, white pearl! My sudden adoration, my great love! |