LXV] Let a great Assembly be On some spot of English ground LXVI] Let the blue sky overhead The green earth on which they tread LXVII] From the corners uttermost Of the bounds of English coast Where his home the outcast builds LXVIIa] From the cities, where, from caves Hosts of starvelings gliding come LXVIII] From the workhouse & [the] prison LXIX] From the haunts of daily life With common wants & common cares LXX] And lastly from the palaces Where the murmur of distress LXXI] From the halls of wealth & fashion LXXII] Ye who suffer woes untold Your lost country bought & sold LXXIII] Let a vast assembly be- And declare with words, that ye LXXIV] Be your strong & simple words Wide as targets let them be With their shade to cover ye [. Stanza LXV gives rise to no remark. In LXVI the opening And the is struck out in line 1, they stands in place of the established reading ye in line 2, and may was cancelled in favour of must in line 3. The initial And in that line was rejected in the Wise and Mary cum Shelley manuscripts. Stanza LXVII varies considerably from the established version in the second couplet, though the relative page in Note Book II (17 v.) has an uncompleted draft for the triplet which ultimately replaced the second couplet of our text. That triplet, supported by the Wise holograph and also by the Mary cum Shelley manuscript, is,— From every hut, village & town Where those who live & suffer moan For others' misery or their own, a passage which clearly exercised Shelley considerably. Immediately after LXV, which is at the top of page II 17 v., he had begun drafting thus And the Earth Let the Laws Let all come from the uttermost Let all Let the poor & the oppressed [. These six essays he struck out and wrote immediately below them our stanza LXVII, crossing through the line— From the hills & desart fields [. Next came our stanza LXVIIa, much laboured at the foot of 17 v. and the top of 18 r., thus: in from caves From the cities, where, sean Famine Faint at Lux Like the dead from putrid graves Pale Gliding thro the yellow air Of the smoky atmospher[c. Pale seems to have been cancelled before Gliding was written; but the whole couplet was struck out before that of our text was composed; and the entire stanza, when transferred with a slight difference to the Wise holograph, was cancelled by Shelley, who no doubt found it too similar to stanza LXVIII. The Wise manuscript shows the readings Troops for Hosts, and Living Tenants of a tomb. It was immediately after our baser version of the line, Tenants of a living tomb, that stanza LXVI was written on page II 18 r. with marks showing that it was to be transferred. Immediately below LXVI comes LXVIII with line 1 of LXIX. For LXVIII, before we get the imperfect line From the workhouse & prison [, the having, I should say, been accidentally omitted before prison, we have some rejected phrases From a palace & a prison From the And as spectres [. . . and when these had been struck out in favour of From the workhouse & [the] prison Like pale spectres newly risen Women, children, young & old he struck out pale and inserted Where, substituted Weep for Wring, then struck out Weep in turn and began again with Groan for pain & added weep with cold above the line, next substituted for for with and wrote, at the bottom of the page, Lastly from for the beginning of stanza LXX; but, bethinking himself of stanza LXIX, he struck out Lastly from and wrote From the haunts &c. In the fourth line of stanza LXIX, the whole of which is fluently and clearly written, the word barren is indisputably plain and intentional; but the substitution of human for barren in the Wise holograph, followed once more by the Mary cum Shelley manuscript, was obviously judicious, as was the reading of the first line in stanza LXX, Lastly from the palaces [, without the intrusive And of our text, which, as we have seen, was not according to Shelley's first intention. Stanza LXXI occurs on page II 19 r., between LXXIII and LXXIV, but with marks indicative of its intended transfer: its third line was originally of a rather fine and free redundancy |